ext_30014 ([identity profile] eremir.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] writingbyebonio 2006-12-13 03:14 pm (UTC)

Oh, wow. I read the first chapter last night, and I just had to have more. I thought I could stop after six chapters, but no... I didn't get much work done today. :)

I love this verse and how you've split the brothers up only to reunite them in this fabulous way. And it's great the way it reflects the last three episodes of season one and builds on them, making them completely different.

But I have to say the ending underwhelmed me. I would have wanted to see Dean come through on his threat to avenge Sam's rape, and I would have wanted to see Sam go apeshit on his former tormentors. But I love how you dealt with Azazel. Sam knowing the ritual by heart...

I love how Dean is soft and caring in this fic, but still Dean. So many fics lose track of character when they try to make Dean soft, but this didn't.

Good job. I will be expecting sequels. ;)

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