Great story, it's unusual to read stories completely from Sam POV.
I hated Kane and would liked to have seen Sam kill him in the last chapter, but everything else just worked so well together.
You did leave the ending looking like the start of a new story with Sam and Dean looking for the children like Sam, maybe you could get Sam to kill Kane in that (maybe after Kane hurting Dean).
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Date: 2006-12-12 09:09 pm (UTC)I hated Kane and would liked to have seen Sam kill him in the last chapter, but everything else just worked so well together.
You did leave the ending looking like the start of a new story with Sam and Dean looking for the children like Sam, maybe you could get Sam to kill Kane in that (maybe after Kane hurting Dean).
Looking forward to more in this verse.