missyjack ([identity profile] missyjack.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] writingbyebonio 2007-02-21 12:26 pm (UTC)

Lovely - intimate and sensual. great voice for Sam here and i love the imagery of thing, his clothes nothing quite fitting right until he's with Dean.
and
This was just the only dance that he ever really knew.

is a perfect last line. You always do endings do well.

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