ext_29510 ([identity profile] winterboost.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] writingbyebonio 2007-07-09 10:18 am (UTC)

I really liked this one.. I could really sense Dean's confusion in the beginning about everything. Oh, and the whole thing with Sam and Mr. Winchester.. I don't know if they were both Sam or both Evil!Sam, but it was brilliant. And then Sam asking Dean to trust him at the end.. I don't know but.. I just.. Yeah, I love it! :D
Also, those few lines about Dean's memories coming back? Loved the way you described that.

So would this be too soon to be asking for more..? ;) I was thinking I should probably start re-reading the whole thing sometimes, but I don't really have the time for it, haha. Looking forward to more, as always. Great job!

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