ext_41084 ([identity profile] trias-cube.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] writingbyebonio 2008-03-20 04:24 am (UTC)

OMG! Wow! Intense. So tightly packed. The whole piece has a unifying, unique style. Very complex too, kind of like a poem where you have to figure out what's going on. I think I got everything except for one part that I'm unsure about. "there was skin, muscle, and bone bound up together and set against his lips, wet and dripping, a limb spilling what he'd lost, an offering, a command." Is that Sam offering his blood to Dean? At first, I thought it was something more gory, but then this seemed more logical.

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