Hi! I've already said most of my comments to you, but just wanted to comment here too. This installment was just amazing in its structure, and in it's analysis of love, lust, hurt, power, manipulation, anger, fear, urge to destroy, pleasure, despair and hope - all these emotions swirling between Sam and Dean. Your analysis of the mental states and emotions of the two of them was just wonderful.
Some parts of this installment were just unbelievably hot (as I have already discussed with you in full detail ;) ) and some were incredibly hard to read, and your story flowed from one kind of emotion to another with such grace. There wasn't even a tiny boring moment in the story. It was very well packed, crafted, and polished. So, yeah, I got a lot out of this story, in all kinds of ways. I'm still thinking about many parts of this story, even two weeks after first reading it.
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Date: 2008-06-19 04:18 am (UTC)Some parts of this installment were just unbelievably hot (as I have already discussed with you in full detail ;) ) and some were incredibly hard to read, and your story flowed from one kind of emotion to another with such grace. There wasn't even a tiny boring moment in the story. It was very well packed, crafted, and polished. So, yeah, I got a lot out of this story, in all kinds of ways. I'm still thinking about many parts of this story, even two weeks after first reading it.