Oh, wow. The whole uncertain-identities bit could have been gimmicky, but it works SO WELL. I'm just... wow. It works as a beautiful story and then works again on re-read and then makes your reader start thinking about all the parallels and echoes in their relationships, all in 200 words! *flappy hands*
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timeasmymeasure
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Date: 2008-07-09 11:30 pm (UTC)