I like how you integrated WoW into the story, and made it sort of the figurehead.

I can totally see Eliot playing on an RP server, he seems the kind of guy to take things that kind of seriously. My server was down one patch day, so I logged onto one, and was like not ready for some apparent RP veteran I party'd with to demand some kind of story out of my toon, since then I've stuck to my PVE realm, lol.

I like how you characterized Hardison, and made him such a hacker, with the free wheeling nature of someone who can know everything about a person in a few clicks.