ext_93582 ([identity profile] putu2sleep.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] writingbyebonio 2009-11-17 01:24 am (UTC)

Yay! More Evil!Sammy! I am amazed at the slow, even path of mind-fuckery Sam (you) is employing so artfully and skillfully.

Poor broken Dean! I feel for him, but at the same time, I can see him changing, or learning, if you think of it like Sam seems to want him (us) to.

This was fantastic, beautifully (horrifically) written, and it just seems so realistic to me. The strong, stubborn hunter isn't winning right now, and all I could think of was, "Come on Sammy, would one ride around the block be so bad?" My heart cries for Dean, but the logic of Sam's response is easy to rationalize in this setting.

Great job! I am captivated by this verse.

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