Damn so sorry I forgot to get back to you. :/ It wasn't my fault really. Just this piece. The way you wrote it. I just really dunno what to say not to mundane it cause it was just really brilliant. I love these flash type of stories almost as much as I like epic backgrounds. It's just this one moment picked out and presented while so much stays hidden, is hinted to, we can guess. I liked the use of language and it again, for me as a not native reader almost struck with it's complexity and yet it's so flowing and once you can grasp it all it really almost like a painting where each detail is unique and interesting and as a whole they form this beautiful and complex puzzle.
Anyway -- am I making sense? I think not. I should probably stop harassing your journal now. :)
*blinks* You would beta for me? Dude -- it would be all kinds of levels of awesome. *is tempted to compose that mail right now thou it's 2 AM and my caffeinated hyper-power is running out* *sigh* So I'm afraid I have to wait another six sleep hours with it and then I can make your life a living hell of non-plot and bad grammar interesting. ;)
*hugs you back*
So I'm off to sleep and will mail you the story tomorrow morning. (Which might be your night given the timezones thing... Well anyhow -- about six hours later.)
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Date: 2010-01-19 11:41 pm (UTC)Anyway -- am I making sense? I think not. I should probably stop harassing your journal now. :)
*blinks* You would beta for me? Dude -- it would be all kinds of levels of awesome. *is tempted to compose that mail right now thou it's 2 AM and my caffeinated hyper-power is running out* *sigh* So I'm afraid I have to wait another six sleep hours with it and then I can make your life
a living hell of non-plot and bad grammarinteresting. ;)*hugs you back*
So I'm off to sleep and will mail you the story tomorrow morning. (Which might be your night given the timezones thing... Well anyhow -- about six hours later.)