Fanfic - SPN: Bloody Holiday (Sam, Dean)

[writingbyebonio]

Title: Bloody Holiday
Author: eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester, Dean Winchester.
Prompt: "No more holidays" for Dec. 25 of 365wprompts. And 065. Morose. For 100moods, challenge table here.
Word Count: 100 words exactly.
Rating: R for violence.
Warnings/Spoilers: Gen. Dark! Angst! Character death! Graphic violence! Holiday theme. Plot. Drabble. No spoilers.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Really. Nothing.
Summary: A holiday Hunt gone bad … very bad.
Author's Notes: Ummm … yeah, I'm still having to do schoolwork on my supposed vacation and I think I'm getting ... Bitter? Angry? Murderous? Do I need to apologize for this?



No more holidays, no more days at all. Couldn't do it, wouldn't do it. Not today of all days, not any day. But he'd done it. The feral glint of strength lit his brother's eyes and Hunter-him overrode Brother-him. The trigger clicked, gun chamber emptied, new silver bullet cycled in. The old one buried deep, before bursting out, splitting skin, bone, tissue, bone, skin, hair, then only air. The blood splashed bright, a morbid firework behind his brother's body, falling, kneeling, then flat. Then the blood seeped. He hardly blinked before his fingers squeezed the trigger once again. Then nothing.

Comments

[missyjack.livejournal.com]

Dark!you is very very scarey.(and I love it)

I'll just be over here in the corner quivering and weeping.

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Ha! Why thank you, m'lady. *bows*

[orphan-project.livejournal.com]

-shivers- Wow....I'm...speechless..There's just so many things that this fic could go with and... >.> You've inspired me again...-goes off to write-

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Thank you, dear. I'm glad to hear I'm putting more ideas in your head. They look so pretty there. *g*

[ckll.livejournal.com]

Whoa! Dark and angst!

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Yeah. Lotsa that here! *hee*

[ejtheviking.livejournal.com]

That was excellent. Creepy, angsty, bloody. So much said in one little drabble.

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Thank you muchly! I certainly appreciate the complimentary feedback!

[(Anonymous)]

You know with these kinda fics I like it when we don't know which brother it is until the end or even in this particular one which one at all because I really don't think it matters as there's a good chance in this scenario it would end the same way no matter which it was.

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Yeah. I totally understand. I definitely felt like the ambiguity was necessary to make the piece even more dark/haunting. I'm glad you liked it!

[merihn.livejournal.com]

Wow. Powerful. very powerful.
♥

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much. I'm glad you found it so powerful.