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Title: See, Shout, Breathe [Evil!Sammy Universe]
Author: [livejournal.com profile] eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Prompt: Inspired by [livejournal.com profile] spnwank (The Good Kind). "066-Naughty" for [livejournal.com profile] 100moods, challenge table here. "36-Wanking" for [livejournal.com profile] 50kinkyways, challenge table here. "002-Hands" for [livejournal.com profile] sam_slut_a_thon, challenge table here.
Word Count: ~1400 words total.
Rating: NC-17 for language and sexuality.
Warnings/Spoilers: No spoilers. Interlude. Comment!porn. PWP. Body part!kink (hands). Masturbation. Voyeurism. Public sex. Wincest. Slash. Smut. Graphic m/m sex. Some Kink/BDSM (D/s) overtones. Established relationship. Future. AU after "Simon Said."
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Really. Nothing.
Summary: Dean wants to watch. Sam wants to do it in public. Then, Dean just wants to breathe again.
Beta: [livejournal.com profile] traffic_west gets props for the flash beta job. All current errors and oddities are my own.
Author's Notes: These are three separate porny interludes presented in the order they were written. I didn't think I was writing them for any of my 'verses, but the more I worked on them, the more I realized that this 'verse has taken over my mind. So, they're completely out of context, but they do all happen in the "Before the Day of Fire" part of this 'verse, sometime after the forthcoming "Plain Gold Band". And don't forget to check out the many other porny bits at [livejournal.com profile] spnwank. Some of them might even be mine. ;-D // For more info about my Evil!Sammy Universe, including links to all installments, please go here.



1: See

"I wanna watch you."

His cock was out and Sam was kneeled up between his bent and spread legs, but right then, seeing the shift of muscle under Sam's skin, Dean just wanted to lay back and watch.

Sam looked a little puzzled, but a lot turned on. "You serious? You don't want-"

"Told you, Sammy. I wanna watch."

He let his tongue glide out over his lips before he pulled the bottom one in, biting down, and his hips lifted up just a little as he thought this through in full technicolor.

"Let me watch you. ... Then you can- … fuck me open with your fingers … while you watch me."

He could feel the slow rumble of his voice deep in his chest and Sam groaned, his fingers wrapping quick around his cock with a sharp squeeze.

"You keep talking like that and it won't take long."

It took a minute for his mind to process the words, because he was watching Sam's dick ride up and down in the pull of his hand. The sweep of his thumb right over the ridge of his cock forced little whimper-moans from Sam's throat and Dean thought he could come just from hearing those sounds.

He brought his hands up, brushing over Sam's thighs and Sam leaned into him until Dean could feel the rock of Sam's hips as he fucked his own hand. Their cocks were so close now and Sam's slow tempo was hypnotic and deep, like Sam was really fucking into him. He spared a glance up at Sam's face and saw his brother's lips parted and wet, his lashes sliding all the way down as his eyes rolled back.

Sam's hand was sliding over his cock faster, then, his grip tight enough to make his dick throb red as he grunted in time with his thrusts. Sam all but fucked him, the force of his movements rocking both their bodies as the tug of his hand on his cock lost its rhythm. He pulled back a bit with a low moan and a shudder, milking his dick until it shot wet strings of spunk on Dean's cock and abs.

Dean was panting, then, his cock leaking its own slick, as Sam pulled up on his dick once more, draining it with a groan. Then he looked at Dean with a blissed-out smirk and eyes dark with want.

"Your turn."




2: Shout

Sam fucked into him, slow, pressing him into the metal of the stall divider. They were in the bathroom of some backwards bar in who-knew-where, but as Sam's fingers wrapped themselves around Dean's dick, he really couldn't bring himself to care. He had that amazing throb in his ass from being so full of Sam's dick and from the angle, so rough with only spit for lube. Sam had demanded it, though, his hand heavy on Dean's thigh under the table. Then he'd followed him into the bathroom, waiting a respectable time.

Dean could feel the rub that would leave marks from his wrinkled jeans straining just below his knees because Sam wanted his legs spread as far as they would go, because Sam wanted to take his time with this, make him ache. And damn did he.

The force and friction of Sam's cock driving rough into his ass made him want to cry out, but he bit down on his lip until it split. Sam's hand was fisting over his cock, though, and he thrust up into the slide of that hand, even as he pressed back, impaling himself on his brother's dick. Then there was warmth pooling at the base of his cock, sparks pulsing out to every nerve in his body, and he bucked against Sam, opening his mouth with a silent yell of bliss as his cock jerked, spitting pearly come onto the painted metal finish in front of him. A final jolt of orgasm shot through him and he tensed up, his hole pulling in Sam's cock until he felt the edge of teeth through his shirt as Sam bit down on his shoulder and emptied a fuck's worth of spunk into his ass.

Then they breathed, cooling down for the moment, but Dean knew that later - not here - but later, they'd fuck themselves weak and he'd shout himself hoarse.




3: Breathe

"Bend over."

They'd only just walked into the room, but already Sam was pressed right up against his back, his low tones flowing hot over Dean's ear.

"What?"

It wasn't that he wasn't turned on. Oh fuck was he turned on. But, he was kind of confused.

"I said bend over. Actually … undo your pants … and bend over."

"Sammy?"

He wasn't really all that concerned, but he felt the need to ask anyway.

"Yeah, Dean. Just me. But I want it like this tonight. Understand?"

Fuck yes. He could feel his chest heaving just a little bit faster now and not quite as deep as before.

"Yeah, Sammy. Sure do."

"Well then … I said … bendover. … Now."

Sam's voice slid over him, warm and slick like come, and Dean knew Sam was too serious to wait and he was too aroused to back down. His fingers tripped over themselves undoing his belt, his fly, and pushing down on his pants and boxers as he bent over the corner of the closest bed. His layers of shirts were shoved up towards his neck and he felt the press of lips on his back, planting kisses like brands, burning, in a trail that led to the crease of his ass. Then he heard and felt Sam spit, the wet from his mouth followed closely by fingers sliding down to the outer rim of his hole.

One of those fingers pressed into him, slowly, but another pushed its way inside when he was only just barely ready and he groaned down into the bedspread. Sam's fingers fucked into him, rolling in and out until they slid over that spot and he nearly jumped up, grunting. Sam kept playing over that bundle of nerves, though, the sensations spiraling up into him, so intense that they made his whole body throb and his voice roughen like his throat was shredded.

"Oh fuck, Sam, just- … just fuck me already."

Sam slid his other hand under Dean, his fingers curling around Dean's cock with a quick tug that made Dean gasp.

"That's not the plan. … You're gonna come just like this … with my hand on your dick … and my fingers deep in your ass."

Dean's voice huffed out, strained, with what felt like the last of his air.

"Fuck."

A tremor of need and soclose skated down his back and Sam just rubbed slow hard circles rightthere, his hand gripping tight as it slipped up and down Dean's dick. It almost seemed like he could feel the calluses of Sam's fingertips as they skimmed over the crown of his cock now, too sensitive, but fuck if he didn't love the hardroughnow of the way Sam was taking him.

Dean felt the pressure inside him increase tenfold, almost pain, as Sam urged his hole to take one more of his fingers and god it felt forced, like his ass couldn't handle so much of that he-man's hand without pourings of lube, but god he was sofuckingclose now, his heartbeat racing like there'd be a prize if it burst. Sam sped up the flick of his wrist to meet the demands of that pulse and Dean could feel his sac tighten and quake as the hand on his dick yanked out quick, brutal strokes until he was moaning on top of his moans as if breathing was optional.

"Come for me."

Sam's words, growled and urgent, hit his body like a sudden wall of desire and Dean's breath stopped as his ass clamped down on Sam's fingers.

"Then, we're gonna do this all over again."

The air in his lungs slammed out of him with a groan as he shook, spilling his come out onto the bed, his cock twitching as the last of his orgasm dripped out of him and he wheezed like he hadn't seen air in a year.

But Sam gave no time for him to catch his breath right then. Not then and not for many hours after then.

Date: 2007-03-11 10:46 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] orphan-project.livejournal.com
Yummy. I enjoyed this.

Date: 2007-03-12 03:04 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Date: 2007-03-11 11:22 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] tattoo-kink.livejournal.com
Holy fucking shit!

*comes and dies dead*

Date: 2007-03-12 03:07 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
*hee* YAY! Oh, not about the dying thing, but about the ... ahem ... enjoyment. :) Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2007-03-11 11:45 pm (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Oh, I see what you meant when you talked about parallels ;) Training Day definitely has echoes of the first part.

Yours
~L

p.s

Will you write the After parts already? Porn is ok and all that, but you do plot even better (do you consider that a compliment or an insult? Because I meant that as a big compliment).

Date: 2007-03-12 03:10 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Heh. Yeah, there's that one. But seriously, you know too much. Shhh! XD

Yours,
The Slightly Less Evil Author

P.S. Dude, I'm always writing in this 'verse and yes, I'm working on plotty stuff, but we'll see. There's an important bit of Before that seems to be writing itself right now so ... *shrugs*. I am the Dean to my muse's Evil!Sam. *nods*

Date: 2007-03-11 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] aesvir.livejournal.com
That was hot.

You're conditioning us to expect porn on Sundays.
(But I have to echo L in saying that your plots are even better!)

Date: 2007-03-12 03:13 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly! And I hadn't even realized I usually post around this time, but I guess that's true, end of the weekend and all that.

(As for what L was saying, thank you. I like my plots too, but I had these finished and so many of you suffered so beautifully with poor Dean through "Just For You". So ... maybe this is me being Evil!Sam here and going "easy" on you ... or making amends for the necessary Dean-torturing ... or something. *shifty eyes*)

Date: 2007-03-11 11:58 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] la-folle-allure.livejournal.com
SO.
HOT.
I.
AM.
LE.
DEAD.

*DIES*

Date: 2007-03-12 12:21 am (UTC)
From: (Anonymous)
Another eboniorchid victim;)

Date: 2007-03-12 03:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Aww, baby. I didn't mean to kill you, but I'm awfully glad you liked it. Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2007-03-12 01:39 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] idiot4dean.livejournal.com
Hot sex for the boys and Sam getting all domineering on Dean.

Love the interlude.

Looking forward to move in this verse

Date: 2007-03-12 05:14 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly!

More is on the way, as always!

Date: 2007-03-12 02:21 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] saturnsdaughter.livejournal.com
There's no better way to spend a Sunday night... -fans self-

Very intense writing, nice work.

Date: 2007-03-12 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad it got you hot! ;-)

Date: 2007-03-12 04:06 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] mgbutterfly.livejournal.com
holy fuck... HOT!

This was just what I needed before bed...

I'll be in my bunk.

Date: 2007-03-12 05:15 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm so glad it gave you a little something to enjoy tonight. ;)

Date: 2007-03-12 04:58 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sionell8.livejournal.com
Yay, totally hot porn!

I think I need a cold shower now.

Date: 2007-03-12 05:16 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
*hee* Thank you. *sends Dean to start your (mutual) shower* :D
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Date: 2007-03-13 05:21 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
*hee* I'm glad this got you interested. :D

And as for Sam not being the old Sam, dom!Sam is part of it, yes, but there are other things too, which you'll see more in a bit. "Plain Gold Band" and "Nothing Left" will both show more of what Sam was like and how Dean responded to and/or ignored it. :)
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Date: 2007-03-14 10:41 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Oh yeah ... Me and Kripke are tight. He was like, "have you said SOON yet," and I was like "not yet," and he was like, "well you better get on that." I guess I'll just have to keep working on my fan-teasing skills.

P.S. Glad to hear you got a good grade and that your teacher thought it was well-written. That's awesome! Good for you!

Date: 2007-03-12 01:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] dokunokasumi.livejournal.com
*DEATH!...but a happy one? Never knew I was a Wincest! Fan?*

Date: 2007-03-13 05:11 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
:D Yay! Another fangrrrl for the Special Hell. XD

*cough* I mean ... glad you liked the story! Thanks for commenting!

Date: 2007-03-12 02:17 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] winterboost.livejournal.com
Now, this is a veeery nice thing to come home to from school and to forget all the homework assignments that are piling up.. *g*

A lovely little porny interlude. And the evil! (or more dom!Sam here) shines through already.. I loved it!! Especially knowing what's to come of poor Dean and all..

Great stuff!

Date: 2007-03-13 05:28 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Heh. I totally understand about that homework situation. I think fanfic wins most of my fanfic vs. homework fights. XD

And thank you for the sparkly feedback! He's definitely dom!Sam, though the evil is brewing, I'm sure. Glad it worked for you! *draws hearts around my pretty porny tortured boys*
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Date: 2007-03-13 05:32 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you very much!

And I don't know about every fangrrrl, but I definitely think dominance looks really good on Sam and that dom!Sam looks really good on Dean. :D

Date: 2007-03-13 09:09 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] lostandalone22.livejournal.com
Wow, that's hot. I like top!Sam in these.

Date: 2007-03-13 05:33 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you! I'm glad you're digging a little Sammy on top. I forget how many people love Sammy on the bottom. :)

Date: 2007-03-13 10:42 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] snuffkin.livejournal.com
Whahaa Hot! ♥

I have to go study now and it's your fault if I can't concentrate :P *g*

Date: 2007-03-13 05:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you muchly! But I'm not remotely sorry that I've distracted you from studying with smut. Yep, not very sorry at all. XD

Date: 2007-03-21 06:00 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/_sin_attract/
Mmmmmmmm, that was HOT.

The perfect thing to read before going to bed!

Date: 2007-03-22 06:11 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you! I hope you had sweet dreams! :D

Date: 2007-03-28 09:42 pm (UTC)
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From: [identity profile] velvetine01.livejournal.com
porny, porny goodness. i liked it! :D

The air in his lungs slammed out of him with a groan as he shook, spilling his come out onto the bed, his cock twitching as the last of his orgasm dripped out of him and he wheezed like he hadn't seen air in a year. hahaha poor dean, he can't catch his breath. not that i blame him with sam molesting him like that! haha

Date: 2007-04-24 07:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you! Glad you enjoyed the porn and the mild Dean-torture that seems to occur when Sam goes all "Sex. Now." on him. XD

Date: 2007-12-15 05:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] unavoidedcrisis.livejournal.com
Yay!

Just yay! That is all.

Date: 2007-12-15 05:30 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
:D Glad you liked it!

Date: 2007-12-17 06:45 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neeuqdrazil.livejournal.com
*dies*

And I'm stuck at work and I can't do a damn thing about the...

Ahem.

This is a public comment, isn't it?

*shifty eyes*

Yes.

Well.

Lovely story, m'dear.

Nothing to see here. Move along...

Date: 2008-07-05 06:49 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Dude ... just saw your icon and went 0__o Is that you having some special time with a special friend? *picks tongue up off of floor*

Date: 2008-07-06 03:02 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] neeuqdrazil.livejournal.com
Yes indeed. [livejournal.com profile] rednikki and I had just had our hair done that afternoon, and our boys decided that there needed to be a photoshoot. There were photos of us against walls, in a stairwell, in the elevator... this was the best of the lot, though.

(And yes, she was a special friend at that time, more or less.)

(no subject)

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Date: 2008-07-14 06:35 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] sam-dean-lover.livejournal.com
*......................................................................................................................................*

Date: 2008-07-15 09:01 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
I'm guessing that's a good thing. LOL. So, thanks! :)

Date: 2008-08-29 09:06 pm (UTC)
From: [identity profile] extremespndiva.livejournal.com
Mmmmmm that was HOT! Cant wait to read more Evil!Sammy

Date: 2008-09-30 03:28 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] writingbyebonio.livejournal.com
Thank you! The next installment should be up very soon now! :)

Date: 2011-09-25 03:38 am (UTC)
From: [identity profile] deadbeat-nymph.livejournal.com
Damn, this is hot. I think I missed it somehow, or maybe it's just so fucking hot that it melted my brain. It's probably that second one; I'll have to read it again and again until I'm sure. Guh.

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