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writingbyebonio ([personal profile] writingbyebonio) wrote2006-12-11 12:00 am

Fanfic - SPN: I Didn't Know Me Until I Met You (Sam/Dean)

Title: I Didn't Know Me Until I Met You
Author: [livejournal.com profile] eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural (AU)
Pairings: Sam/Dean, implied Sam/Kane
Characters: Sam Winchester (aka Sam/Shemhazai Gregory), Dean Winchester, John Winchester, Meg Masters (aka Gadriella Gregory), Kane Gregory (aka The Demon's unnamed son), and The Demon (aka Alistair/Azazel Gregory)
Prompt: "Hot Vengeful Assassin + Sexy Hero Target = Good Triumphs Over Evil + Love Conquers All" for [livejournal.com profile] undermistletoe's Harlequin Romance Week (due Dec. 12). Full [livejournal.com profile] undermistletoe prompt available here. List of [livejournal.com profile] 100moods chapter prompts available here, with my whole challenge table available here.
Word Count: ~30,000 words altogether.
Rating: NC-17 for language, violence, and sexuality.
Warnings/Spoilers: AU. Slash. Angst. Dark. Wincest. Violence. Graphic m/m sex. Smut. Manipulation. Implied non-con. Implied underage. Implied non-wincest incest. Hurt/Comfort. First time. Humor. Plot. Multi-chapter (complete). Lots of spoilers for the "Pilot," "Dead Man's Blood," "Salvation," and "Devil's Trap." Potential vague spoilers for various other episodes of Season 1.
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Really. Nothing.
Summary: On his first half-birthday, Sam Winchester was taken from his human family to be raised by one of the clans of the Grigori. These fallen angels, myth to most, are often called "demons" and many are hunted for their contributions to human bloodshed. Dean Winchester is one such Hunter. When these two connected souls find each other after 22 years apart, sparks will fly, but who will be burned?
Author's Notes: I thought this was an idea for a fic, but it turned out to be an idea for a fic UNIVERSE. *oops* Thanks to [livejournal.com profile] missyjack and [livejournal.com profile] miriad for audiencing. References available here. Translations of rituals available here.
Soundtrack: Information over here.
Archive: Umm ... probably. Just ask.
Feedback: PLEASE! I'd love it after chapters, but if you left some FB after you've read the whole thing, that would be fantastic. I LOVE FEEDBACK!



Chapter 1: I See and See into You
Chapter 2: I Feel You and Forget Myself
Chapter 3: I Bleed and I Kneel for You
Chapter 4: I Mend and Break for You
Chapter 5: I Laugh for You and Cry for Me
Chapter 6: I Find You and Lose Myself
Chapter 7: I Know Myself and Change You
Chapter 8: I Hear for You and Speak for Me
Chapter 9: I Call and I Open for You
Chapter 10: I Die for You and Stand for Me
Chapter 11: I Love and Leave for You
Chapter 12: And Now It Is for Us to Do

[identity profile] missyjack.livejournal.com 2006-12-12 09:16 am (UTC)(link)
Me first!!! I just finished it. The confrontation be between Sam and his father was fantastic - and how he picked it was - great mirror on the canon scene. It amazes me how you used canon plot in this and STILL I was surprised.

And congratulations - its a great acheivement and a wonderful 'verse you've created. There's so many more stories I'd like to read. But before I loose those bunnies on you I'll let you bask in the glory of this!

[identity profile] wistful-fever.livejournal.com 2006-12-12 11:07 am (UTC)(link)
This was incredible. I read it all in one sitting and it kept me involved all the way through.

(Anonymous) 2006-12-12 11:46 am (UTC)(link)
I read it all in one sitting. Excellent!!

-Aya

[identity profile] phoenix-bellamy.livejournal.com 2006-12-12 01:15 pm (UTC)(link)
Awesome.
I had to read it all in one go *_*...Very well done!

[identity profile] cocombat.livejournal.com 2006-12-12 01:31 pm (UTC)(link)
I enjoyed this.
Good, entertaining read, with a fleshed out AU, and nice parallels with the canon.

Reading the prompt afterwards was hilarious though, because while this was more serious, and less camp than the prompt-novel, I could definately see the plot parallels.
So - is Dean actually of succubus descent? That sounds like an interesting idea to play with. ;)

Just to make sure I've got this straight: Sam is Mary & John's son, by way of John's possession by Azazel, right? And Azazel is the one that killed Mary, then kidnapped Sam to be raised by them, yeah?
If so, why does Sam refer to himself as a bastard? Is it because Azazel is being counted as a third parent? Or did I miss another guy there?
;)

Also, nice twist on the standard cesty guilt trip, Dean's was more the standard - oh god, my brother (but I'll deal with it anyway). Sam's more - oh god, my brother again. And ow. Could be worse things, obviously.

[identity profile] alznthlay.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 03:35 am (UTC)(link)
Don't think I could have put it down even if I'd tried.

Read all in one go, totally kickass 'verse. Loved it. And would love more ;)

But yes, this was great. :D

[identity profile] eremir.livejournal.com 2006-12-13 03:14 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, wow. I read the first chapter last night, and I just had to have more. I thought I could stop after six chapters, but no... I didn't get much work done today. :)

I love this verse and how you've split the brothers up only to reunite them in this fabulous way. And it's great the way it reflects the last three episodes of season one and builds on them, making them completely different.

But I have to say the ending underwhelmed me. I would have wanted to see Dean come through on his threat to avenge Sam's rape, and I would have wanted to see Sam go apeshit on his former tormentors. But I love how you dealt with Azazel. Sam knowing the ritual by heart...

I love how Dean is soft and caring in this fic, but still Dean. So many fics lose track of character when they try to make Dean soft, but this didn't.

Good job. I will be expecting sequels. ;)

[identity profile] knownaskate.livejournal.com 2006-12-19 03:20 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. I'm just... speechless. WOW. O___O;;

That was really great! I wish I could give more constructive feedback, but I'm just... *flails* Totally at a loss for words!! Let's try one word: OMGILOVETHISFICSOHARDITHURTS. ♥ ♥ ♥

I can't wait to see more from this 'verse. ^^;; *bookmarks*

[identity profile] jezdenly.livejournal.com 2006-12-27 08:34 am (UTC)(link)
I just read all of this, and I must admit I really really loved it. Are you thinking about writing any more to it? Cause I'm sure a lot of people would enjoy that! ;)