Fanfic - SPN: Promises (Sam/Dean)
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Title: Promises [Evil!Sammy Universe]
Author:
eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Prompt: 097. Uncomfortable. For
100moods, challenge table here. As well as: 29. Submissive. For
50kinkyways, challenge table here.
Word Count: ~800 words.
Rating: NC-17 for language and sexuality.
Warnings/Spoilers: Angst. Dark. Future. Apocalypse. Slash. Wincest. Manipulation. Dubious-Con. Graphic m/m sex. Kink/BDSM. Smut. Dreams. Potential vague spoilers for Season 1 and "In My Time of Dying".
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Really. Nothing.
Summary: Dean's first taste of willing submission.
Author's Notes: This story follows directly after Bury the Hunter (Sam/Dean) as a kind of epilogue and is also a kind of prologue to Training Day (Sam/Dean). For more info about my Evil!Sammy Universe, including links to all installments, please go here.
He rolled over on the motel bed.
"Hey." Sam was already awake, smiling at him, lit by a glow in the room from some lamp Dean couldn't see.
"Hey yourself." Dean smiled back, so relaxed and warm, not sleepy, just rested, content.
Sam reached out a hand to sweep over Dean's cheek, slowly, a gesture of comfort. "How're you holding up?"
He leaned into his brother's hand, not hot, just warm, rough with calluses from Hunting, but somehow still soft. "Not too good, Sammy."
Sam just nodded, continuing his comforting caress.
"I … I miss you."
Sam gave a half-laugh. "Not that you'd ever say that."
His smile fell. "No one to tell."
Sam nodded solemnly. "I know."
"He's not … not you … not anymore."
"But he could be, again."
"You really believe that?"
"You do."
"I don't know how not to."
"Then you'll find a way."
Dean scoffed, bitter. "Like with Dad?"
"Dad made his choice. I wouldn't have chosen this. You know that."
"Do I?"
Dean.
"He's calling you."
"I could stay."
Sam shook his head, amused, sad. "I'm not any more what you need than he is."
He knew it was true, but that didn't make leaving any easier. "Will I see you again?"
"Dude, they're your dreams. If you want me here, I'm sure you'll find me."
Dean.
"You'd better go."
"Yeah. But I'll be back. Or I'll get you back. I promise, Sammy."
He closed his eyes and when he opened them again, he was sore, and tired, and not-his-Sam was whispering over his ear, his hand traveling over Dean's body.
"Dean, you're awake. Good. I want you to come for me before breakfast." Sam's hand slipped down to fit over Dean's morning wood.
He felt a wave of nausea roll through him. This Sam was such a perversion of everything good about his Sammy. It disgusted him that Sam had absolutely no qualms about making him into some kind of fuck-and-play doll who would come on command for entertainment purposes. He opened his mouth to say no, to tell Sam to stop, but then he snapped it shut again.
He'd chosen this.
When given the choice between drugs or death or surrender, he'd waved the white flag. Of course, Sam would want to make sure that he followed through with his promises, make sure that he even could. He tried to settle the sickness rumbling in his stomach, letting go of some of the tension he was holding. Sam wasn't even asking for much right now. Dean knew that would come later. But for now, was it really so bad to wake up to a hand job, even if he wasn't given any say in the matter?
Sam's stroke was bringing him so close to climax, he could taste his own desires, his own needs, but this time they were all his, all natural. And just as he was about to come, Sam clamped down at the base of his dick and he could feel all the need building up almost to bursting.
"Beg for what you want, Dean, and maybe I'll be generous."
He stifled a laugh, shaking his head. Nothing was just an uncomplicated fuck with Sam anymore. He always wanted to demonstrate his dominance.
But it didn't really matter what Dean thought of his brother's love of power right then. And it might never matter. He had surrendered, said he would give Sam what he wanted, give it to him willingly. Down other paths lay pain and madness, but all of them stamped Dean as property of Sam Winchester. He no longer had rights to his own body, so Sam still wasn't asking for much. Begging was just one more thing he'd have to grit his teeth and bear. Sam's ownership of him wasn't just going to go away.
"Please … sir … may I come now?"
Sam tugged over his cock a few more times, hard, and Dean just knew that he wouldn't last long.
"Please."
His hips were pumping up into Sam's fist and he could feel the first tremors of a lazy morning orgasm begin to spread throughout his body.
"Please!"
"Yeah. Do it."
And Dean let himself go, panting and falling into the sweep of pleasure rushing through him, his come hot and slick on Sam's hand, his belly, and the bed.
"See, Dean. That wasn't so hard. You do know how to be a good whore, how to respect your owner, how to do as your told. You keep being a good boy and I'll only hurt you when it's sexy. I promise."
It wasn't much. But it had to be better than the drugs, and better than death. It just had to be.
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Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester
Prompt: 097. Uncomfortable. For
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Word Count: ~800 words.
Rating: NC-17 for language and sexuality.
Warnings/Spoilers: Angst. Dark. Future. Apocalypse. Slash. Wincest. Manipulation. Dubious-Con. Graphic m/m sex. Kink/BDSM. Smut. Dreams. Potential vague spoilers for Season 1 and "In My Time of Dying".
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Really. Nothing.
Summary: Dean's first taste of willing submission.
Author's Notes: This story follows directly after Bury the Hunter (Sam/Dean) as a kind of epilogue and is also a kind of prologue to Training Day (Sam/Dean). For more info about my Evil!Sammy Universe, including links to all installments, please go here.
He rolled over on the motel bed.
"Hey." Sam was already awake, smiling at him, lit by a glow in the room from some lamp Dean couldn't see.
"Hey yourself." Dean smiled back, so relaxed and warm, not sleepy, just rested, content.
Sam reached out a hand to sweep over Dean's cheek, slowly, a gesture of comfort. "How're you holding up?"
He leaned into his brother's hand, not hot, just warm, rough with calluses from Hunting, but somehow still soft. "Not too good, Sammy."
Sam just nodded, continuing his comforting caress.
"I … I miss you."
Sam gave a half-laugh. "Not that you'd ever say that."
His smile fell. "No one to tell."
Sam nodded solemnly. "I know."
"He's not … not you … not anymore."
"But he could be, again."
"You really believe that?"
"You do."
"I don't know how not to."
"Then you'll find a way."
Dean scoffed, bitter. "Like with Dad?"
"Dad made his choice. I wouldn't have chosen this. You know that."
"Do I?"
Dean.
"He's calling you."
"I could stay."
Sam shook his head, amused, sad. "I'm not any more what you need than he is."
He knew it was true, but that didn't make leaving any easier. "Will I see you again?"
"Dude, they're your dreams. If you want me here, I'm sure you'll find me."
Dean.
"You'd better go."
"Yeah. But I'll be back. Or I'll get you back. I promise, Sammy."
He closed his eyes and when he opened them again, he was sore, and tired, and not-his-Sam was whispering over his ear, his hand traveling over Dean's body.
"Dean, you're awake. Good. I want you to come for me before breakfast." Sam's hand slipped down to fit over Dean's morning wood.
He felt a wave of nausea roll through him. This Sam was such a perversion of everything good about his Sammy. It disgusted him that Sam had absolutely no qualms about making him into some kind of fuck-and-play doll who would come on command for entertainment purposes. He opened his mouth to say no, to tell Sam to stop, but then he snapped it shut again.
He'd chosen this.
When given the choice between drugs or death or surrender, he'd waved the white flag. Of course, Sam would want to make sure that he followed through with his promises, make sure that he even could. He tried to settle the sickness rumbling in his stomach, letting go of some of the tension he was holding. Sam wasn't even asking for much right now. Dean knew that would come later. But for now, was it really so bad to wake up to a hand job, even if he wasn't given any say in the matter?
Sam's stroke was bringing him so close to climax, he could taste his own desires, his own needs, but this time they were all his, all natural. And just as he was about to come, Sam clamped down at the base of his dick and he could feel all the need building up almost to bursting.
"Beg for what you want, Dean, and maybe I'll be generous."
He stifled a laugh, shaking his head. Nothing was just an uncomplicated fuck with Sam anymore. He always wanted to demonstrate his dominance.
But it didn't really matter what Dean thought of his brother's love of power right then. And it might never matter. He had surrendered, said he would give Sam what he wanted, give it to him willingly. Down other paths lay pain and madness, but all of them stamped Dean as property of Sam Winchester. He no longer had rights to his own body, so Sam still wasn't asking for much. Begging was just one more thing he'd have to grit his teeth and bear. Sam's ownership of him wasn't just going to go away.
"Please … sir … may I come now?"
Sam tugged over his cock a few more times, hard, and Dean just knew that he wouldn't last long.
"Please."
His hips were pumping up into Sam's fist and he could feel the first tremors of a lazy morning orgasm begin to spread throughout his body.
"Please!"
"Yeah. Do it."
And Dean let himself go, panting and falling into the sweep of pleasure rushing through him, his come hot and slick on Sam's hand, his belly, and the bed.
"See, Dean. That wasn't so hard. You do know how to be a good whore, how to respect your owner, how to do as your told. You keep being a good boy and I'll only hurt you when it's sexy. I promise."
It wasn't much. But it had to be better than the drugs, and better than death. It just had to be.
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Date: 2006-12-16 11:18 pm (UTC)My
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Dean ! I wanna you to be rescued ! ...Oh come on, can't you like, make buffy end the apocalypse or smthing ?
Naah just kidding, I love tortured!Dean.
And I watched your list and OMFG you're planning on soo many ! I LOVE YOU
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Date: 2006-12-17 04:55 am (UTC)Yeaaaa
Date: 2006-12-17 02:54 am (UTC)Re: Yeaaaa
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Date: 2006-12-17 05:43 am (UTC)Ages ago i said you were redefining dark!fic and you said WTF? I think this is what i mean. There are countless stories out there that are dark or about tirturing dean but that don't bring with them the emotional resonance and layers that your writing does.
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Date: 2006-12-17 06:36 am (UTC)Why did this comment almost make me cry, MJ? Thank you so so very very much! Your depth of insight always makes me weak in the knees. You just fill my heart with WOW and all things BEAUTIFUL and GOOD! Seriously.
And that (plus your pretty, pretty insanity) is why I LJ-married you. *sighs with sweet nostalgia*
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Date: 2006-12-17 12:03 pm (UTC)This Universe is so bleak ... Dean really does suffer so incredibly well, a martyr for Sammy ...
So will things ever get better? I don't know if Sam can ever come back from what he has become ... I figure you do - but its alright if you're not telling ...
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Date: 2006-12-17 12:28 pm (UTC)I'm glad you see the bleakness and still keep coming back for more. :-) Dean has so much suffering yet to do in this 'verse, just you wait and see.
Oh man, the whole, "can evil!Sam ever be his!Sam again" question ... of course, I can't frigging tell you! *g* That would like spoil the ending and make babies cry 'n' stuff and you don't want that! But, at this point, I love hearing all the speculation, because ... yeah ... I honestly hope y'all will be at least somewhat confused/worried/hopeful/cynical until the big reveal at the end. *hee*
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Date: 2006-12-18 01:50 pm (UTC)Well, the fact that there will be an end is kinda comforting...Being sadistic, I like this suffering verse, but last time it left me completely distraught because I thought you were going on with this ad infinutum and I really couldn't stand...'cause as the Dean of this verse knows well, it's frustrating to have all this tension/angst building up and then not having a climax somewhere.
I don't care how long will it take for it to arrive, I just need to know there will be, one in which Dean kills himself/get the old Sammy back.
I don't rule out staying with this evil!Sam and being his bitch forever, but I hope you'll leave an open ending in that case :P
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Date: 2006-12-19 05:45 pm (UTC)Thanks for leaving feedback, hun!
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Date: 2007-01-30 12:07 am (UTC)I'll be a sadist and admit Tortured!Broken!Submissive!Dean is such a beautiful thing. And the way your write his interactions with Evil!Sammy, is just so full of torment and emotion. And your writing allows us to feel the love and emotional tug-of-war happening in both these wounded souls. And reading the 'verse in sections is like putting together a puzzle, as we get little clues as to why Sammy turned, and wonder if Dean will be able to save him.
And to be honest I'm not typically a fan of wincest unless of course there is a good story to really draw me in. And you are one of the fanfic writers who has shown me how amazing wincest can be when packed with a detailed, searing great drama. So yeah, I'm a big fan of the series and I hope you update soon. Tell your muse we're ready for more :)
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Date: 2007-01-30 04:33 pm (UTC)Honestly, I'm kind of stunned in the loveliest way by your incredibly kind words!
I'm enjoying watching the characters and storylines unfold themselves too. *g* Even though I've probably "watched" this whole series play out a million times in my head, it's a different experience when I put it down on paper, then read it, and hear other peoples' reactions. I'm glad that the puzzle-like style this series is taking works for you, because that's definitely something I've worried over as a rather non-linear writer.
It's interesting that you're not a Wincest fan, but still enjoy this, since it's pretty Wincest heavy, but if the emotions and drama and everything are enough to draw you in even with the Wincest, then that's awesome!
I sincerely hope that the series continues to be one that intrigues you. And, to that, I just posted the next installment in this 'verse, "Training Day". It's split into 8 chapters for easier reading and it has smut, but is really about so much more than that. So ... go forth and see what's in store for Dean next! XD
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Date: 2007-12-17 04:38 pm (UTC)And Dean's hope that His Sammy is still inside the Other Sam. But his resignation to what Is, and the hurt!Dean...
(You do realise I'm grovelling at your feet right now, right?)
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Date: 2012-09-28 08:23 am (UTC)Once again, the dream made me cry. I don't even watch the show anymore.
This 'verse was/is amazing.
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Date: 2011-03-19 01:12 pm (UTC);__; Soooo sad,but also hot IDK LOL
Thank you