Fanfic - SPN: Whore Academy (NC-17, Slash: Sam/Dean)

[writingbyebonio]

Title: Whore Academy [Evil!Sammy Universe]
Author: eboniorchid
Fandom: Supernatural
Characters: Sam Winchester/Dean Winchester, OCs
Prompt: "Humiliating - Display - Control" (bottom forced to perform in front of others) for forbiddenfic's Inappropriate Content Ficathon. "029-Ditzy, 063-Mischievous, 035-Enraged, 056-Kinky, 059-Listless" for 100moods, challenge table here. "020-Standing in corner" for 50kinkyways, challenge table here. "001-Roleplay" for sam_slut_a_thon, challenge table here. "A learning experience" from June 19, 2007, at 365wprompts.
Word Count: ~21,100 words.
Rating: NC-17 for language, sexuality, and violence.
Warnings/Spoilers: Angst! Dark! Future. Apocalypse. Manipulation. Dubious-con. Kink/BDSM. M/s. Public sex. Humiliation. Impact play. Roleplay. Orgasm control/denial. Blood (a little). Exhibitionism. Voyeurism. Service kink. Doubles. Threesome (Sam/Dean/Sam). Hurt/Comfort. Dirty talk. Amnesia!fic. Dream!fic. Established relationship. Graphic m/m sex. Violence. Mentions of past non-con. Wincest. Slash. Smut. Plot. Multi-chapter (complete). AU after "Simon Said". Potential vague spoilers up through "Simon Said".
Disclaimer: I own nothing. Really. Nothing.
Summary: Dean finds himself in a very strange school with gaps in his memory, a penchant for failing, and more Sams than he can feasibly handle.
Beta: Thanks be to L ♥, orphan_project, and raynedanser.
Soundtrack: "Devour" by Disturbed, Believe Album (lyrics) - "Magdalena" by A Perfect Circle, Mer de Noms Album (lyrics).
Author's Notes: Dean is Dean, for a moment, and Sam is very nearly Sam, but he's also a psychotic prep school teacher who likes to straighten out bad boys with the width of his ruler and the length of his … yeah. Things start out light enough, but get darker as the story unfolds. // Additional notes at the end. // For more info about my Evil!Sammy Universe, including links to all installments, please go here.

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Chapter One: Failing
Chapter Two: Enduring
Chapter Three: Fighting
Chapter Four: Submitting
Chapter Five: Remembering and Forgetting

Comments

[winterboost.livejournal.com]

The links to the chapters aren't working.. They all go back to your writing journal. Thought you might wanted to know ;)

Looking forward to reading this one!

[winterboost.livejournal.com]

Hee. never mind..

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Okay! Everything's up now and accessible! :) Enjoy!

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Yeah ... I'm still putting them up ... did this show up on your f-list or were you tracking the tag?

[winterboost.livejournal.com]

I was gonna reply that I'm tracking the tag, but you've already changed the post.. So it was probably the trackin gthing then, heh..

I saw it popping up and since I'll be gone this weekend I figured I might just try and squeeze a chapter in now.. Gives me something to look forward to and all, haha..

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Heh. Okay. :) Well, I hope you enjoy whatever bits you get through tonight. :)

[gwendolynmstacy.livejournal.com]

Bah! I saw this yesterday but still haven't gotten to read it - I'm busy working on all of those gilmore girls caps (see my LJ or well WinchesterBros.com - you'll find insanity) and I squeed so badly when I saw this because I told you I loved your Evil Sam and IDKMTIMY verse(s) then got ;/ when I realzed I had stuff to do.

In short bookmarked, promise to leave coherant or non coherant feedback later though most of the time I am coherant haha. Don't know when I'll finally read though.

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Well, I'm glad you're excited, even if you're busy right at the moment. I assure you that it'll be here when you have a chance to breathe/read. So ... no worries. Thanks for letting me know you'll be back, though. And I'm looking forward to hearing your thoughts. :)

[trueshellz.livejournal.com]

gah
*grabby hands*
i decide to check my f- list now
before i do soem work
gah!!
*saves*
will read and review by sunday
when i get a chance to breath
but i cant wait
youre an awesome writer
*smish*

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Oh thank you so much! I hope you enjoy this one as much as the others! Looking forward to hearing your thoughts! :D

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

*meep*. That's all I can manage at the moment *g*. Speechless. Will write more later.

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Thank you, I think. :D I dunno how I made you speechless, but I figure it's a good thing. Let me know if you have any more thoughts later. :) And thanks for the feedback. :D

[pushkin666.livejournal.com]

So eventually I got back to leaving fuller feedback. I'm so useless, but better late than never.

Anyway I came away from this part of the story arc feeling sorry for Sam which I wasn't expecting. I was also really really irritated with Dean. He is very Dean in this isn't he *g* You almost feel that if he'd done as he was told in this and behaved things wouldn't be quite so awful as they become and Sam might not be as cruel to him as he is. Not sure if that's what you were intending but that's how I read it. I also find it interesting that the girl tells him to watch out for Sam. Who's she? Do we see her again? Nope I'm not expecting you to answer.

This was very hot and an interesting view into how their world has become, the training etc. I always find when I read one of these chapters that I have to read it more than once to pick everything up and even then I'm probably not getting everything. You can also still see the love that Sam has for Dean in this, how much he wants Dean to accept what he's become but of course Dean being Dean he won't, and if he did would Sam really want him. Anyway enough of my questions.

So yes, this was excellent as ever and left more questions than it answered.

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Dude, you are NOT useless. I love feedback whenever, however, wherever, etc. Feedback can't be late, to me. :)

Now then, as for how/what this piece made you feel? I'm big on believing in the validity of a vast array of reactions to/interpretations of text. I think the situation is complex for both boys, perhaps more than some readers thought up to this point. So, if this piece gives you some different perspectives on each of them, then I consider that a major success. I think it's quite reasonable, though, to both have sympathy for and be bothered by both boys. Nothing is cut and dry here.

As for the various other characters seen here, I'll just say keep your eyes wide open. ;-D

I'm glad you found the story hot and also interesting in terms of the bits of this world that you got to see. I definitely understand the need for re-reading. It's one of the things about this 'verse that I love. There are little nuggets of information half-hidden everywhere, both about the world and about the boys. It's good to hear, though, that Sam's affection for Dean and desire for his brother to accept things came through. They're both just so twisted up right now. *sigh*

As for questions, you're allowed to ask as many as you like, whenever you like. It's always really interesting for me to hear what people are pondering as they read my stories, so ... no need to stifle yourself here. This particular piece is absolutely meant to create some questions, but you may also find, as the series continues, that it also answers some questions that you might only start to ask later. *is cryptic*

Geewhiz, do I love writing and talking about this 'verse! Thanks for coming by and indulging me with your reading and your in-depth feedback! :D

[dubiously.livejournal.com]

Do I need to be familiar with your Evil!Sammy 'verse in order for this story to make sense? I don't normally read dark!fic, but this summary sounds interesting, and I'd like to give it a try.

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Umm ... I actually think that this is probably pretty good place to jump in if you've never read the 'verse, because Dean is trying to piece things together throughout the story himself, but it, of course, makes more sense in the context of what's already been revealed in the 'verse.

As to the question of darkfic, I'm probably the worst person to ask, but there isn't a lot of direct violence, though the dub-con is very dubious.

Hope that helps!

[lostandalone22.livejournal.com]

I'm so happy that I was able to find time to read this tonight, because you're absolutely made of awesome. I love your writing, and this was another great story. Wonderful job! *hugs*

[writingbyebonio.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I'm glad that you liked this and that you like my work. It means a lot. *many hugs* And I always appreciate your lovely feedback. :D